I wanted to incorporate more line of action to the previous drawing, but it wasn't successful at all! XD
Phil's advice was that the volumes are too even compared to the last one, and too much emphasis on the line of action made it have less of an "organic" feel to it. Making it stiff and weird. Also, the silhouette of the servant reads better on the first one.
I think most of the times, when I redraw something it ends up losing a lot of what the one before had..